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when you went away
the flowers wilted
and the birds stopped singing
i was left with a million memories
regrets etched into my wrists

within my tears, sparkle dreams
that you wish to forget
the windows to my soul
have become vancant and cold
falsalities spreading my lips wide

my love poisoned my heart
i drew a pit and ripped it apart
i no long love you, i do
for the boy in my soul
screams for our love too

shadows splay past realities
i surround myself in night
for in light come darkness
but in darkness
nothing is in sight
©2007-2009 ~Slaymaker
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Author's Comments

You know when you can't stand the world or the pain you surround yourself in more pain and suffereing because you don't want to realize that there is good in the world when you receive none of it.

I wrote this when I was in the woods, so it's pretty much crap, but oh well.

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:icongemini86:
I thought this poem had potential. The words you choose to use in your poems are always dead on. It amazes me so.

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:iconslaymaker:
yeah, I need to write more because I think my writing has sorta become bent out of shape in certain parts. Not as good of a flow anymore.

:) thanks for the comment ^ ^

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